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Domain Spirit - Mansion

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Alright, let's try this I guess.

So some of you will notice that Mansion Invitation stopped. Many requested that I bring it back! Apparently it was super popular, yikes. Well, I sort of needed to revise it. I lost pace on it, forgot what certain bits were foreshadowing, needed to keep my characterization in line. So, instead of making a chapter 9 after months and months of absence, here's the plan.

Mansion Invitation is now Domain Spirit: Mansion. This is the prologue; chapter 1 is fully rewritten already. I will update this file regularly, adding on parts from Chapter 1 while I rewrite Chapter 2. Same release schedule for Chapter 2, chapter 3, and so on. Hopefully this means I don't lose pace. Any watchers I have will get to see the Mansion shenanigans with much, much more regular updates. I'll try to get Chapter 2's rewrite done quick, so I can get Chapter 1 out in daily micro-updates.

Next chapter: The first cute dress, more bad jokes, further catchphrases, my continued abuse of second person narrative, and more supernatural things. It is, once more, 2spooky!

Divergence from original Mansion prototype forthcoming.

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SilverDemon1405's avatar

did anyone ever pick up this story? if so can you link me?